Tangled

During the movie I had a lot of weird feelings. I felt sad at points and then there were other points when I couldn't help but laugh. I wish that the movie would be more serious but it was kind of hard to make the story more serious than what it was.

When people get hit in the face with frying pans you can't help but laugh but when Rapunzel is forced to stay in the castle all the time you can't help but feel bad for her. So through out the story I was thinking about how that could relate to the real world and figured out that it can relate because there are people in this world who are locked up because their parents say they have to be. The only thing in the movie that I didn't think really fit was the fact that people were getting hit in the face with frying pans

So in the movie the feelings that I had all ended up fitting into reality. So in the end I understood exactly what was going on.

writing assessment

Do you ever feel like animals can understand you? Well sometimes they really can understand and know exactly what you are saying. The only thing is we can't understand them.

When they talk about the king getting married and wanting to serve doves at the feast the queen to be objects. The queen seemed to have some connection with the doves that she didn't want the fowler to kill them. She tried to stop him but the king told her that it was decided.

When I first read the story I thought about my cats. When I was younger I used to have a ton of cats and I'd be all excited about it. The only problem was that not even a week later my mother would get rid of them and say that they had some kind of problem. I knew that there was nothing wrong with them and the more my mom got rid of them the more upset I would become.

So this story was basically showing that the queen to be had a love for the doves and didn't want anything to happen to them. She had a connection with the animals. A love for them and didn't want them to be served at the wedding feast.

Goup Writing piece

I'm driving down the street and looking around at all the empty houses. Ever since I had made the contract with Claude my butler demon thing my world had not been the same. I was in Spain because Claude had told me that I was going to meet Ciel here but as I drive I see no one at all. The place where I am now is just a graveyard city. Just as I look to the right I see this weird creature. I think of what it could be. I think of what animals it looks like. An armadillo and a skunk mixed into one that's what it looked like. So I decided to call it and armadilloskunk. It was the weirdest creature I had ever seen. I got out of the car and followed it behind one of the houses and there I see a whole army of armadilloskunks just waiting to attack. I jump back and take a run for the car. I turn around and see that the creatures are following me. I scream and all of a sudden I run right into Ciel. I look around a little startled by his sudden appearance . He looks down at me and I look up and give a little chuckle of embarrassment. Just as I turn around to see how close the armadilloskunks are I see that all of them are bashing their heads against the road. I look up at Ciel and stand up. I am about to go back to my car when Ciel grabs my arm and drags me the other way. I try to pull away but I can't. When we stop walking I see Sebastian standing there and of course where there is Sebastian there is always Grell. All of a sudden Ciel climbs on the table and doesn't move. I hear Sebastian telling me to eat him. So I walk over to the table and tell Ciel that I am sorry for having to eat him. He just laughs and says that it is fine. So I eat Ciel. Although I don't feel comfortable doing that. As soon as I a finished eating him I see Grell move out from the shadows and jump on Sebastian. O great now we get to see how Grell feels about Sebastian. Anyways so I look around and start to walk to where Sebastian is standing. All of a sudden Grell is standing in my way acting defensively to keep me away from Sebastian. I glare at Grell and he glares right back at me. I start to move around him but he just moves in front of me again. Then I hear someone call my name.
"Come here Earl Alois Trancy"

I look around and see Claude standing behind me. I walk over to him and start t go back the direction of my car. I look up at Claude and think of how glad I am that he had come and gotten me out of Grell's way. I really didn't want to deal with that guy today. It was bad enough he hated me for no reason. I start to walk away and all of a sudden a guy with the last name freemason walks up to us and tells Claude that the "package" had arrived. I looked at Claude confused and he just continued to talk to this guy. All of a sudden the man has a box with him and is loading it into the car. I look startled and try to think what we might be trying to smuggle back to England. I think of all the possibilities of what it could be. We get home and Claude opens the package and inside is greengurglegump. I look confused at why we would need more of that stuff because we already had enough saying as Claude is a spider and all. I walked away disappointed when Claude grabs my arm and pulls me back to the package. He reaches inside of it and pulls out a sword. I look surprised because I had not seen that in it a minute ago. Claude hands me the sword and then walks off. I decided to go and try out my new sword so I go out to find Grell. I find Grell hovering by the window of Sebastian's room. I sneak up behind him and tap him on the shoulder. He turns around startled and pulls out a little pair of scissors. All of a sudden I feel a sharp pain in my Hambone. Even though I don't know what that is. I fall to the ground and out comes Sebastian taking the scissors away from Grell. If Sebastian hadn't taken the scissors away from Grell I think he might have killed me. I was a little startled. I looked at Sebastian who looked down at me. He looked as if he was going to say something but nothing came out of his mouth. I watched as Grell jumped up and hugged Sebastian and Sebastian threw Grell in another direction. Grell just got up and acted like Sebastian hadn't done anything.

Loss & Friendship - A Secret for Two

The story "A Secret for Two" is a story about friendship and loss. I say this because throughout this story you can see that Joseph and Pierre had become best friends  and I say loss because in the end Pierre loses his best friend to death. 

When Pierre  met his horse Joseph for the first time I thought of the first time you meet someone at school. Or the first time that you make a friend. As Pierre and Joseph's  friendship grew strong I thought about how no matter what happens friendships get stronger.  This was proved by Pierre in this story because the more he was around Joseph the more the horse seemed to get closer to who Pierre was.

 When Joseph died I thought of what it is like to lose something or someone who was really dear to you. I thought about how when you lose a friend it might feel like you won't make a new friend to replace them. I also thought about what it feels like to lose a family member whether it be to death, divorce or even being abandoned. I thought about how much it must have hurt to lose someone who was  so close to you like the way  Joseph was close to Pierre 

In the end people all have different opinions on how Pierre died. Some say it was murder. Some say it was suicide. But the group that I stand with is the group that said that he was so over come with grief that he didn't hear the truck coming and his death was an accident.

Books to read and my opinion n Animal Farm

I really did not care for this book. I wish we had done  sonething else. Actually I like doing independent reading better than having to read a book as a group. Some opinions of books that the class should try is the Guardians of Ga'hoole series. I believe that these books are good for students who just want to relax and enjoy a easier book. If you want more af a challenge you should read NIGHTSHADE and  Confessions of the Sullivan Sisters. If you want to kind of go back in history you should read Ruined a novel. If you want any other book ideas you can come and find me and ask for an opinion on basically any genre.

FINALE INDEPENDENT WRITING PIECE!!!!!!!

Did you ever think that love was easy? In the  book NIGHTSHADE  by Andrea Cremer the main character Calla thought that love was going to be easy but only found out  that love was harder than people say it is. I believe the theme of this book is love is difficult because that is what Calla found out when she fell in love with Ren and Shay.

The first time I saw the theme of the book was when Calla saves Shay from the bear.  When she saves him even though she is not allowed to you can tell that she has feelings for him. She kept thinking that she was going to get in trouble but the Keepers, the people that Calla works for, never seemed to find out about it.

Another time that the theme appears is right after the accident encounter. Calla finds out that Shay is going to be at her school and can't stop thinking about him. She tried to ignore him when he came but she kept having her attention drawn to him instead of to her "mate" Ren.

After Shay comes to her school Calla finds out from her master Logan that she is supposed to protect Shay. She is to spend time with  him and get to know him but in the process they fall in love and she finds that she is trying to keep her relationship with Shay a secret from Ren and the Keepers.

The final time that I saw the theme was when Calla finds out that Shay is the prey that Ren and herself have to hunt and kill to  prove that they can lead a pack. Calla goes out of her way to save Shay and they end up together in the enemy territory of the Keepers.

Creative Writing Piece

Author's note: I am not finished with this story, but here is what I have so far.  I need help thinking of a title and with opinions about what could be better. I have been working on this for a while and I  don't know which direction to take it.         


                                                               Chapter 1:Tessa

I'd never in my life broken a rule, but when I met him all that changed. I snarl at the approaching hunter. Most wolves would run from a hunter, but not me. I never run. I continue to snarl as the hunter circles me and the injured male wolf.

Tessa!

I look up and see my mate standing behind the hunter looking as if he had just seen  a ghost. I whimper as I feel the hunter slam the dulled end of the blade into my shoulder. The wolf I was trying to save growls and I see that he is standing and limping his way up to the hunter.

No! Don't do that!

I gasp hearing myself telling the injured wolf not to attack the hunter in his weak form. My mate howls and the hunter turns around  startled by the sound of a wolf right behind him. He stalks forward and before I can say anything he brings the blade of the knife down into my mate's head. I watch as the horror of what just happened sinks in. My mate the one I loved collapses on the ground and his body goes limp. The hunterjust as startled that he had killed the wolf ran off and didn't look back once.

No! Please! Please! I need you don't die on me!

No response my mate just wouldn't get up. I begin to cry. The injured wolf I had saved came over and nuzzled me trying to comfort me.

T-T-Tessa g-g-get o-o-out of here w-while you c-c-can.

I look down at my mate. He whimpers and tries to give me my favorite grin. I let out a pained cry as I set my head on my mate. My mate nuzzles me softly then lets out his last breath before his head hits the ground and his eyes roll back. Like most alpha wolves would do when they lost a mate  I let out a blood curdling cry.

Um.... excuse me but I just wanted to thank you for saving me.

I snarl at the injured wolf who cowered  and backed off. I looked down feeling really embarrassed about what I had just done. I sighed. The wolf looked at me curiously. He was leavin heading back to the forest and I didn't want him to so I did the only thing  that came to my mind.

Do you want to come with me to start a pack?

He looked at me a little startled by what I had just asked. As soon as I realized that I had basically just trown my self at him with words I cringed. I looked away feeling my blood start to boil with embarrassment.

I was going to ask you that but you snarled at me before I could ask.

I looked up and saw that the wolf was standing right beside me. I smiled my most flirtatious smile. Battted my wolf eyelashes and did my sexiest walk around him. When my tail was by his muzzle I made sure to whip it across in front of his eyes. He grinned and nipped playfully at my tail.

You are a lot more attractive than I thought you would be. My name is Alejandro, and who might  you be?

I gave him a devious grin nipping at his ear.He let out a playful growl and started laughing under his breath about how playful I was.

My name is Tessa. Nice to meet you Alejandro. I hope we can create the the best pack ever.

He chuckled and looked at me. His coat was black as the darkest nights. Then I saw his eyes, a deep golden yellow. I gasped. My breath was taken away the moment our eyes met.