Creative Writing Piece

Author's note: I am not finished with this story, but here is what I have so far.  I need help thinking of a title and with opinions about what could be better. I have been working on this for a while and I  don't know which direction to take it.         


                                                               Chapter 1:Tessa

I'd never in my life broken a rule, but when I met him all that changed. I snarl at the approaching hunter. Most wolves would run from a hunter, but not me. I never run. I continue to snarl as the hunter circles me and the injured male wolf.

Tessa!

I look up and see my mate standing behind the hunter looking as if he had just seen  a ghost. I whimper as I feel the hunter slam the dulled end of the blade into my shoulder. The wolf I was trying to save growls and I see that he is standing and limping his way up to the hunter.

No! Don't do that!

I gasp hearing myself telling the injured wolf not to attack the hunter in his weak form. My mate howls and the hunter turns around  startled by the sound of a wolf right behind him. He stalks forward and before I can say anything he brings the blade of the knife down into my mate's head. I watch as the horror of what just happened sinks in. My mate the one I loved collapses on the ground and his body goes limp. The hunterjust as startled that he had killed the wolf ran off and didn't look back once.

No! Please! Please! I need you don't die on me!

No response my mate just wouldn't get up. I begin to cry. The injured wolf I had saved came over and nuzzled me trying to comfort me.

T-T-Tessa g-g-get o-o-out of here w-while you c-c-can.

I look down at my mate. He whimpers and tries to give me my favorite grin. I let out a pained cry as I set my head on my mate. My mate nuzzles me softly then lets out his last breath before his head hits the ground and his eyes roll back. Like most alpha wolves would do when they lost a mate  I let out a blood curdling cry.

Um.... excuse me but I just wanted to thank you for saving me.

I snarl at the injured wolf who cowered  and backed off. I looked down feeling really embarrassed about what I had just done. I sighed. The wolf looked at me curiously. He was leavin heading back to the forest and I didn't want him to so I did the only thing  that came to my mind.

Do you want to come with me to start a pack?

He looked at me a little startled by what I had just asked. As soon as I realized that I had basically just trown my self at him with words I cringed. I looked away feeling my blood start to boil with embarrassment.

I was going to ask you that but you snarled at me before I could ask.

I looked up and saw that the wolf was standing right beside me. I smiled my most flirtatious smile. Battted my wolf eyelashes and did my sexiest walk around him. When my tail was by his muzzle I made sure to whip it across in front of his eyes. He grinned and nipped playfully at my tail.

You are a lot more attractive than I thought you would be. My name is Alejandro, and who might  you be?

I gave him a devious grin nipping at his ear.He let out a playful growl and started laughing under his breath about how playful I was.

My name is Tessa. Nice to meet you Alejandro. I hope we can create the the best pack ever.

He chuckled and looked at me. His coat was black as the darkest nights. Then I saw his eyes, a deep golden yellow. I gasped. My breath was taken away the moment our eyes met.

The Carnival in Spain Continued!

                                                                  5 YEARS LATER!!!

Okay so maybe 5 years ago that incident with Matthew, maybe I handled that the wrong way. So I made it my goal to find  Matthew and tell him that I didn't mean to try and kill him. (or did I)  So I begin my search at finding my "friend"

The first place I decided to look was Canada! When I arrived in Canada I found a carnival going on and figured I should look there because Matthew loved carnivals. I went into the carnival and sure enough I found Matthew in line for the ferris wheel.

Matthew! 

I call knowing that I am close enough for him to hear me. He turns around and smiles at me. I can't believe it he actually smiled even after I tried to kill him.

Hello Francis! It is about time we meet again.

I look at hima and he suddenly pulls out a knife and sneaks up behind me. Before I know what happens he stabs me and that is the end of me.


P.S. I write this one from my new home.

The Carnival in Spain! by Francis

Authors note: In this story I have brought in some anime characters to make it a little more fun.


I enterd the carnival in Spain. Yes I said in Spain. My name is Francis and this is why I am terrified of carnivals and Spain.

I was new to this place. Only visiting with my "friend" Matthew. I had come here because Matthew dragged me along and I mean literally dragged me. The ferris wheel was the one ride I did not want to go on.Only problem was Matthew wanted to go on it and insisted that I go on it too. I agreed only to regret getting on. As the ferris wheel went around I was screaming. All Matthew did was cover his ears so he couldn't hear me screaming and laughed at me.

When we got off we went to the game area and I decided I wanted to play darts. The only difference with my version of darts was that I wanted to use Matthew as the dart board. Matthew was a lot faster than he seemed. When ever I threw a dart at him he was already in a different spot.

In the end it was not worth it because while Matthew was probably somewhere else I was stuck here.

                                                                THE END!!

 P.S. I write this from my cell in the prison that I am in. I'll send you a post card some day. I hope you like pictures of blank walls found in Spain!!!!!